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Ta-umr ye "Dhaval" raheNgaa "Sunita" aapka karazdaar....!
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Thumbs up Ta-umr ye "Dhaval" raheNgaa "Sunita" aapka karazdaar....! - 11th July 2007, 11:04 AM

Mere Pyaare dostoN:

"namaskaaR aor adaab...aaj Mere Sister kaa janamdin haii abhee abhee kuch aSh'aar uNke liYe ess dil sey nikle haiN..ussko kaaGaz par laane kii aik chhotii kosiSh kii haii..ummid haii aapko yeH kosiSh pasaNd aaYeNgii..Sister ye aapke liYe..!

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aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

hoNThoN pe muskaan,
bani raheN yuuNhii..
khuShiyaaN jaevan meiN,
sadaa raheN barkaraar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

le luN maiN aapke sabhii,
aankhoN ke yeH aaNsu
badle meiN duN aapko,
khuShiYoN kii bahaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

thaa akela bazm meiN kabhi,
thaama tha aapne meraa haath
acchhe bure ka fark samjHaa ke,
diyaa hai aik maa.N kaa pyaar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

kyaa deN saktaa huN maiN,
bhalaa aapko.. na maalom
Ta-Umr ye "Dhaval" raheNgaa,
"Sunita" aapkaa karazdaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar....!


*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...

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11th July 2007, 11:17 AM

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

"namaskaaR aor adaab...aaj Mere Sister kaa janamdin haii abhee abhee kuch aSh'aar uNke liYe ess dil sey nikle haiN..ussko kaaGaz par laane kii aik chhotii kosiSh kii haii..ummid haii aapko yeH kosiSh pasaNd aaYeNgii..Sister ye aapke liYe..!

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aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

hoNThoN pe muskaan,
bani raheN yuuNhii..
khuShiyaaN jaevan meiN,
sadaa raheN barkaraar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

le luN maiN aapke sabhii,
aankhoN ke yeH aaNsu
badle meiN duN aapko,
khuShiYoN kii bahaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

thaa akela bazm meiN kabhi,
thaama tha aapne meraa haath
acchhe bure ka fark samjHaa ke,
diyaa hai aik maa.N kaa pyaar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

kyaa deN saktaa huN maiN,
bhalaa aapko.. na maalom
Ta-Umr ye "Dhaval" raheNgaa,
"Sunita" aapkaa karazdaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar....!
ADDAB DHAVAL SAHAB kya baat hay apne sunita ji ke lye jo nazam likhi hay wo kabeele tareef hay .........bahut achha likha hay aapne.......maza aa gaya.......es koshish ke liye daad hazir hay kubool ho


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11th July 2007, 01:51 PM

Dhaval ji,

Aaj kuch kahane ko hai hi nahi.n. Dua bas yahii rahegi di ke liye ke bas vo humeshaa hansti.n rahe.n.

Aur haa aap bhi kya yaad rakhoge, chalo daad de hi deti hu.n warna kahoge Pooja ne daad nahi di

Ok ji ijaazat!!!

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11th July 2007, 02:57 PM

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

"namaskaaR aor adaab...aaj Mere Sister kaa janamdin haii abhee abhee kuch aSh'aar uNke liYe ess dil sey nikle haiN..ussko kaaGaz par laane kii aik chhotii kosiSh kii haii..ummid haii aapko yeH kosiSh pasaNd aaYeNgii..Sister ye aapke liYe..!

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aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

hoNThoN pe muskaan,
bani raheN yuuNhii..
khuShiyaaN jaevan meiN,
sadaa raheN barkaraar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

le luN maiN aapke sabhii,
aankhoN ke yeH aaNsu
badle meiN duN aapko,
khuShiYoN kii bahaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

thaa akela bazm meiN kabhi,
thaama tha aapne meraa haath
acchhe bure ka fark samjHaa ke,
diyaa hai aik maa.N kaa pyaar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

kyaa deN saktaa huN maiN,
bhalaa aapko.. na maalom
Ta-Umr ye "Dhaval" raheNgaa,
"Sunita" aapkaa karazdaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar....!

thaa akela bazm meiN kabhi,
thaama tha aapne meraa haath
acchhe bure ka fark samjHaa ke,
diyaa hai aik maa.N kaa pyaar...


ye to bilkul sach likha dhaval unka pyar waqai aesa hi hai bohat khubsurat tareeke se wish kia hai sunita di ko hmmmm bhai ho to aesa


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bhut khub - 11th July 2007, 03:14 PM

dhaval mere chhotu kyaa baat hai kyaa andaaz hai mujhe lagta hai sunita ji ko tere pyar par garv mehsoos ho raha ho0ga.....bhut dil se mubaraq dii hai tumne......mujhe tumhara ye andaaz bhut bhaya.....yun hii likhte raho........raj.......


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Smile frnd 4 ever - 11th July 2007, 03:46 PM

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

"namaskaaR aor adaab...aaj Mere Sister kaa janamdin haii abhee abhee kuch aSh'aar uNke liYe ess dil sey nikle haiN..ussko kaaGaz par laane kii aik chhotii kosiSh kii haii..ummid haii aapko yeH kosiSh pasaNd aaYeNgii..Sister ye aapke liYe..!

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aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

hoNThoN pe muskaan,
bani raheN yuuNhii..
khuShiyaaN jaevan meiN,
sadaa raheN barkaraar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

le luN maiN aapke sabhii,
aankhoN ke yeH aaNsu
badle meiN duN aapko,
khuShiYoN kii bahaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

thaa akela bazm meiN kabhi,
thaama tha aapne meraa haath
acchhe bure ka fark samjHaa ke,
diyaa hai aik maa.N kaa pyaar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

kyaa deN saktaa huN maiN,
bhalaa aapko.. na maalom
Ta-Umr ye "Dhaval" raheNgaa,
"Sunita" aapkaa karazdaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar....!

Aadab dhaval ji,
kaise hain aap?

wah wah,kya baat hain,hame nahi lagta ,k ab hum logo ko sunita ji se kuch bhi kehne ki zarurat hain,
kyunki aapne jis andaz main unhe wish kiya hai,,isse badkar kya kahe ab,

aapke saath_raj ji ne bhi apne hi andaz me,unhe dher sara pyar diya.
aur hum bhi aap logo ke saath unhe dilse dua_e de rahe hain,

apki nazm hame be_hadd pasand aayi,

bohot khoob dhaval ji,
hamesha khush rahiyega
apna khayal rakhiye
.
ALLAH HAFIZ


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Dhaval tumne jo di ke liye likha hain...bas sirf usme pyar hi jhalakta hain...Ab to tumhari party pakki...

khush raho...
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Happy Birthday Sunita ji - 11th July 2007, 04:59 PM

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

"namaskaaR aor adaab...aaj Mere Sister kaa janamdin haii abhee abhee kuch aSh'aar uNke liYe ess dil sey nikle haiN..ussko kaaGaz par laane kii aik chhotii kosiSh kii haii..ummid haii aapko yeH kosiSh pasaNd aaYeNgii..Sister ye aapke liYe..!

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aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

hoNThoN pe muskaan,
bani raheN yuuNhii..
khuShiyaaN jaevan meiN,
sadaa raheN barkaraar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

le luN maiN aapke sabhii,
aankhoN ke yeH aaNsu
badle meiN duN aapko,
khuShiYoN kii bahaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

thaa akela bazm meiN kabhi,
thaama tha aapne meraa haath
acchhe bure ka fark samjHaa ke,
diyaa hai aik maa.N kaa pyaar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

kyaa deN saktaa huN maiN,
bhalaa aapko.. na maalom
Ta-Umr ye "Dhaval" raheNgaa,
"Sunita" aapkaa karazdaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar....!
Dear Sunita ji
First of all Happy Birthday and Many Many Happy Returns of The Day.
May God Bless U and give u all Happiness, Prosperity, Health,Dignity,Love,Respect.

I m thankful too dhaval too who intimate abt ur B'Day.
regards
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11th July 2007, 05:10 PM

pyaare dhaval bhai

dhaval bhai aapke sath mein bhi sunita ji ko janamdin mubarak karta hu.

pyaare dhaval bhai aapki har rachna ki kya baat kare, har rachna mien dil ko chhune wali baat hoti hai, aur is baar sunita ji ko kuch dil se nikle asaaar samarpit karke dil jit liya aapne mera.

dhaval bhai aapne jo baat kahi hai aakhir mien

""kyaa deN saktaa huN maiN,
bhalaa aapko.. na maalom
Ta-Umr ye "Dhaval" raheNgaa,
"Sunita" aapkaa karazdaar....""

is alfaaz pe to dil se daad hazir hai bhaii.

dhaval bhai sada yuhi sabka sath dete rehna

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

"namaskaaR aor adaab...aaj Mere Sister kaa janamdin haii abhee abhee kuch aSh'aar uNke liYe ess dil sey nikle haiN..ussko kaaGaz par laane kii aik chhotii kosiSh kii haii..ummid haii aapko yeH kosiSh pasaNd aaYeNgii..Sister ye aapke liYe..!

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aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

hoNThoN pe muskaan,
bani raheN yuuNhii..
khuShiyaaN jaevan meiN,
sadaa raheN barkaraar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

le luN maiN aapke sabhii,
aankhoN ke yeH aaNsu
badle meiN duN aapko,
khuShiYoN kii bahaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

thaa akela bazm meiN kabhi,
thaama tha aapne meraa haath
acchhe bure ka fark samjHaa ke,
diyaa hai aik maa.N kaa pyaar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

kyaa deN saktaa huN maiN,
bhalaa aapko.. na maalom
Ta-Umr ye "Dhaval" raheNgaa,
"Sunita" aapkaa karazdaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar....!


!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!





Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
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11th July 2007, 05:51 PM

Khooooob Bhaaaalloo Chotte Bhai!!!!

Bahut khoob!!!! Di ke liye tumhara yeh beshumaar pyar, dil khush kr gaya...

Dua hai ki woh humesha khush rahein.. aur tum bhi humesha khush raho.. muskuraate raho..

Apna khayal rakho..

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11th July 2007, 06:59 PM

bahut achha likha hai parh ke bahut achha laga hai meree shubhkamayen to pahunch chukee hongee sunita jee ke pas yoon bhee dobaar se happy b day
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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

"namaskaaR aor adaab...aaj Mere Sister kaa janamdin haii abhee abhee kuch aSh'aar uNke liYe ess dil sey nikle haiN..ussko kaaGaz par laane kii aik chhotii kosiSh kii haii..ummid haii aapko yeH kosiSh pasaNd aaYeNgii..Sister ye aapke liYe..!

****************************

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

hoNThoN pe muskaan,
bani raheN yuuNhii..
khuShiyaaN jaevan meiN,
sadaa raheN barkaraar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

le luN maiN aapke sabhii,
aankhoN ke yeH aaNsu
badle meiN duN aapko,
khuShiYoN kii bahaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

thaa akela bazm meiN kabhi,
thaama tha aapne meraa haath
acchhe bure ka fark samjHaa ke,
diyaa hai aik maa.N kaa pyaar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

kyaa deN saktaa huN maiN,
bhalaa aapko.. na maalom
Ta-Umr ye "Dhaval" raheNgaa,
"Sunita" aapkaa karazdaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar....!
Salam dhaval ji,
Sabse pahle hum janamdin ki bahut saari subhkamnaye dena chahuga or dhaval ji aapko bhi, itne achee nazam likhne ke liye.

Bas aapyun hi likhte rahe.....
ib ijazat
apna kyaal rakhiyega
take care

Aapka Dost
SHAAN


Gamo ki kader karo or unke sath jiyu,
Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah
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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

"namaskaaR aor adaab...aaj Mere Sister kaa janamdin haii abhee abhee kuch aSh'aar uNke liYe ess dil sey nikle haiN..ussko kaaGaz par laane kii aik chhotii kosiSh kii haii..ummid haii aapko yeH kosiSh pasaNd aaYeNgii..Sister ye aapke liYe..!

****************************

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

hoNThoN pe muskaan,
bani raheN yuuNhii..
khuShiyaaN jaevan meiN,
sadaa raheN barkaraar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

le luN maiN aapke sabhii,
aankhoN ke yeH aaNsu
badle meiN duN aapko,
khuShiYoN kii bahaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

thaa akela bazm meiN kabhi,
thaama tha aapne meraa haath
acchhe bure ka fark samjHaa ke,
diyaa hai aik maa.N kaa pyaar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

kyaa deN saktaa huN maiN,
bhalaa aapko.. na maalom
Ta-Umr ye "Dhaval" raheNgaa,
"Sunita" aapkaa karazdaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar....!
mere pyarey chottu.....bahut sarra pyar

chottu maine tera yeh geet...bahut baar pada...har baar reply karne ka bhi socha...par reply na kar saki...dil bhar aata raha....chottu maine to shayad tujhe pyar ke siba kuch bhi nahi diya...par tumne mujhe bahut kuch de diya hai...shayad etne ki mai.n haqdaar bhi nahi hoon....aaj mai.n tere jazbaato.n mei.n dab gaye chottu....aur rajveer ji ne sach kaha hai...mujhe aapne chottu ke pyar par garv hai....maine kuch to aisa diya hi hai shayad tujhe jo mai.n bhi nahi jaanti ki kaya...jiske badley mei.n mujhe tujse etna sab mil raha hai....chottu dua karti hoon ki hamara yeh rishta yeh pyar yu hi banna rahe..kabhi bhi hum dil se door na ho...be-shak hamarey beech meelo.m ke faasle ho...tu hamesha mere dil mei.n raheyga...mera pyara sa chottu...pyara sa bhai...bahut pyara ahsaas hai yeh chottu....ki mera chottu es kadar mere paas hai...!
chottu kal subha bhi jab tumne mujhe woh pyara sa geet
(Phulo.n ka tarro.n ka sabka kahna hai,
aik hazaro.n mai.n meri bhana hai,
sari umr humey sang rahna hai...")

gaa-kar sunaya to meri aankhe bhar aaye thi..badi mushkil se contrrol kiya tha kuad ko....aur pura din teri woh awaz mere kaan.o mei.n shahad golti rahi...

teri yeh "karazdaar rahun.ga" wali baat acchi nahi lagi...bhai - bhaen mei.n yeh karaz shabad kaha se aa gaya...sochna aisa hota hai kaya...mai.n nahi maan-ti aise baat ko...! phir kabhi aisa na kahna...hamarey beech mei.n pyar ka rishta hai...esko karaz ka naam mat dena kabhi....!

aur tere liye do lines likh rahi hoon...jo baar meri juba par aa rahi hai.n

"Tera mujse hai phele ka naata koi,
yu hi nahi dil lubata koi...jane tu ja jane na...
maaney tu ja maaney na....tera mujse hai....."


aur chottu...dilip...tabiyat thik na hone ki vajha se hum sab ke beech jaha teri es mahfil mei.n nahi aa saka....uske liye bhi yeh geet hai mere paas...kal us se aur mamata (bhabhi) se baat karke bahut accha laga...mujhe umeed hai shayad woh jaldi hi mujhe mileyga bhi...kyuki biwi ka kahna sab ko maan-na padta hai, aur mamta es zid par hai ki didi se milwa lao mujhe...samjay.

chottu tumne mera yeh din hamesha ke liye yaadgar bana diya...shukriya mere pyarey bhai...

bahut sare pyar aur duao.n ke saath

teri sister


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.....Sunita Thakur.....

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ADDAB DHAVAL SAHAB kya baat hay apne sunita ji ke lye jo nazam likhi hay wo kabeele tareef hay .........bahut achha likha hay aapne.......maza aa gaya.......es koshish ke liye daad hazir hay kubool ho

kaashif jee adaab:

aap ess khuShii meiN Shaamil huye..mujH~e baRii hii khuShii hu'ii..dost ess naZ^m pasaNd karne ke liYe aor dil sey paRhne ke liYe maiN aapka tah-e-dil sey shuKriyaaH adaa karnaa chaahtaa huuN..guzaariSh hai yuuNhi paRhte raheN aap aage bhee..

khuSh raheN..apnaa khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

W'salaam

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Dhaval ji,

Aaj kuch kahane ko hai hi nahi.n. Dua bas yahii rahegi di ke liye ke bas vo humeshaa hansti.n rahe.n.

Aur haa aap bhi kya yaad rakhoge, chalo daad de hi deti hu.n warna kahoge Pooja ne daad nahi di

Ok ji ijaazat!!!

Grazie

Aapki dost
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Pooja jee namaskaaR:

jee duaa haii kii unhe ziNdagii meiN Bahot saarii khuShiyaaN mile..aur haaN maiN to bhool hi gaYaa..ShukriyaaH..Daad dene ke liYe..

khuSh raheN..apnaa khayaal raKheN

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thaa akela bazm meiN kabhi,
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acchhe bure ka fark samjHaa ke,
diyaa hai aik maa.N kaa pyaar...


ye to bilkul sach likha dhaval unka pyar waqai aesa hi hai bohat khubsurat tareeke se wish kia hai sunita di ko hmmmm bhai ho to aesa
maanii didi Kem chho??

majaamaa ne??

aapko ye aSh'aar pasaNd aaYeN baRaa hii achchhaa lagaa..bas yuuNhii saath dijiYeNgaa..

W'salaam

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maanii didi Kem chho??

majaamaa ne??

aapko ye aSh'aar pasaNd aaYeN baRaa hii achchhaa lagaa..bas yuuNhii saath dijiYeNgaa..

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dear dhaval jee, aaj aapko pada bahut acha laga sach mein dil se nikle hue aapke jasbaat bahut ..... i hv no words .
sunita jee ko meri taraf se janamdin kee laakhon badahiyan.



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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

"namaskaaR aor adaab...aaj Mere Sister kaa janamdin haii abhee abhee kuch aSh'aar uNke liYe ess dil sey nikle haiN..ussko kaaGaz par laane kii aik chhotii kosiSh kii haii..ummid haii aapko yeH kosiSh pasaNd aaYeNgii..Sister ye aapke liYe..!

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aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

hoNThoN pe muskaan,
bani raheN yuuNhii..
khuShiyaaN jaevan meiN,
sadaa raheN barkaraar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

le luN maiN aapke sabhii,
aankhoN ke yeH aaNsu
badle meiN duN aapko,
khuShiYoN kii bahaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

thaa akela bazm meiN kabhi,
thaama tha aapne meraa haath
acchhe bure ka fark samjHaa ke,
diyaa hai aik maa.N kaa pyaar...

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar..!

kyaa deN saktaa huN maiN,
bhalaa aapko.. na maalom
Ta-Umr ye "Dhaval" raheNgaa,
"Sunita" aapkaa karazdaar....

aap jiYo hazaaro saal,
saal ke din ho..pacchaas hazaar....!

dhaval dost namaskar

yaar kamal kar diya tune bada hi pyaara geet ka tohfa diya hai tune sister ko
or dekh main yahan aa hi nahi paya kya karoon tabiyat kuch nasaz thi. per koi baat nahi ab main sister ko badhaii de deta hoon

" many many happy returns of the day"

or teri is khoobsurat kalam per meri dhero badhaii

khush rahna mere dost

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aur chottu...dilip...tabiyat thik na hone ki vajha se hum sab ke beech jaha teri es mahfil mei.n nahi aa saka....uske liye bhi yeh geet hai mere paas...kal us se aur mamata (bhabhi) se baat karke bahut accha laga...mujhe umeed hai shayad woh jaldi hi mujhe mileyga bhi...kyuki biwi ka kahna sab ko maan-na padta hai, aur mamta es zid par hai ki didi se milwa lao mujhe...samjay.


hahahhaha waah didi ise main kya manu...... meri khilli to nahi uda rahi ho aa.n
ab mazboorii to aap samajh hi sakti ho na..................
accha laga didi aapne mujhe yaad kiya...........
apna khyal rakhna.........
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dhaval mere chhotu kyaa baat hai kyaa andaaz hai mujhe lagta hai sunita ji ko tere pyar par garv mehsoos ho raha ho0ga.....bhut dil se mubaraq dii hai tumne......mujhe tumhara ye andaaz bhut bhaya.....yun hii likhte raho........raj.......

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aap yahaaN aaYeN mujH~e baRii hii khuShii hu'ii..aor big B garv to mujH~e haii kii unsey mujH~e Bahot kuch seeKhne ko milaa haii..aur aaj bhii mujH~e yaad haii jab maine ess bazm meiN uNkii uNgalii thaam ke safar kii shuruaat kii thii..yuuNhii aap saath dete rahiYeNgaa..

KhuSh raheN..apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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namaskar dhaval bhai,

app kaise hain, maaf kijiye bahut dher baad aaya hun. humein to malum b nahi tha k didi ka janam din tha. aapne jo likha, aishe ehsaas sirf sache dil se hi nikal sakte hain. aapki yhe nazm humein to bahut achi lagi, itne gehre ehsaas likhe wo b itni masuumiyat se, wah kya baat hai.

aapne jo likha hai wo vakai tareef-e-kabil hai. daad hajir hai janab kabul kijiye.

aapka bhai

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Aadab dhaval ji,
kaise hain aap?

wah wah,kya baat hain,hame nahi lagta ,k ab hum logo ko sunita ji se kuch bhi kehne ki zarurat hain,
kyunki aapne jis andaz main unhe wish kiya hai,,isse badkar kya kahe ab,

aapke saath_raj ji ne bhi apne hi andaz me,unhe dher sara pyar diya.
aur hum bhi aap logo ke saath unhe dilse dua_e de rahe hain,

apki nazm hame be_hadd pasand aayi,

bohot khoob dhaval ji,
hamesha khush rahiyega
apna khayal rakhiye
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Dhaval tumne jo di ke liye likha hain...bas sirf usme pyar hi jhalakta hain...Ab to tumhari party pakki...

khush raho...
mausam

Mausam didi:

Jai mata di..

aapka jawaab deKh kar mere chehre par hameShaa muskuraahat aa jaatii haii....aapko ye liKhaa huaa pasaNd aaYaa.....jaan.K baRii hii KhuShii hu'ii...bas yuuNhii paRhte rahiYeNgaa mujHe aage bhee...

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Dear Sunita ji
First of all Happy Birthday and Many Many Happy Returns of The Day.
May God Bless U and give u all Happiness, Prosperity, Health,Dignity,Love,Respect.

I m thankful too dhaval too who intimate abt ur B'Day.
regards
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Manu bhaa'ii namaskaaR:

itnii Pyaar bhaarii duaaeN merii sister ko dene ke liYe maiN baRaa hii mamnoon huuN..KhuShii hu'ii kii aap yahaaN aaYeN..

KhuSh raheN..apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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16th July 2007, 12:44 PM

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pyaare dhaval bhai

dhaval bhai aapke sath mein bhi sunita ji ko janamdin mubarak karta hu.

pyaare dhaval bhai aapki har rachna ki kya baat kare, har rachna mien dil ko chhune wali baat hoti hai, aur is baar sunita ji ko kuch dil se nikle asaaar samarpit karke dil jit liya aapne mera.

dhaval bhai aapne jo baat kahi hai aakhir mien

""kyaa deN saktaa huN maiN,
bhalaa aapko.. na maalom
Ta-Umr ye "Dhaval" raheNgaa,
"Sunita" aapkaa karazdaar....""

is alfaaz pe to dil se daad hazir hai bhaii.

dhaval bhai sada yuhi sabka sath dete rehna

aapka dost
Merul

Merul bhaa'ii namaskaaR:

aik liKhne waaleN ko KhuShii tab hotii hai jab uskii teHreer paRhne waaloN ke dil pe dastak deN..merii yeh kosiSh ne aapke dil ko chuaa baRii hii KhuShii hu'ii. ess kosiSh ko pasaNd karne ke liye aor Khaas t'aur par aaKhir kii chaNd lines pasaNd karne ke liYe aapkaa shuKriyaaH..!

yuuNhii paRhte raheN...aage bhee

KhuSh raheN...apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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16th July 2007, 12:50 PM

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Khooooob Bhaaaalloo Chotte Bhai!!!!
ShuKriyaaH didi..

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Bahut khoob!!!! Di ke liye tumhara yeh beshumaar pyar, dil khush kr gaya...
aap KhuSh to maiN bhee KhuSh,,,

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Dua hai ki woh humesha khush rahein.. aur tum bhi humesha khush raho.. muskuraate raho..
aor aap kahaaN baaki reh gaYe..aapke liYe to maiN hameShaa duaaeN kartaa huuNdidi....kii aap sadaa muskuraate raheN..aor apnii colgate waali smile mujHe diKhaaYeN..hehe

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Apna khayal rakho..
Zaroor didi..aap bhee apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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bahut achha likha hai parh ke bahut achha laga hai meree shubhkamayen to pahunch chukee hongee sunita jee ke pas yoon bhee dobaar se happy b day
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Maasoom bhaiyaa pranaam:

aap yahaaN aaYeN baRii KhuShii kii baat hay ye mere liYe.....bas yuuN hii aage bhee paRhte rahiYeNgaa....

KhuSh raheN....apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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Salam dhaval ji,
Sabse pahle hum janamdin ki bahut saari subhkamnaye dena chahuga or dhaval ji aapko bhi, itne achee nazam likhne ke liye.

Bas aapyun hi likhte rahe.....
ib ijazat
apna kyaal rakhiyega
take care

Aapka Dost
SHAAN
Shaan bhaa'ii asalaam-o-alaikum:

kaise haiN bhaai aap?? lagtaa hai janaab aaj-kal kaam meiN maShroof hai
...itnii pyaar bharii subhkaamnaaoN ke liYe maiN aapka tah-e-dil sey shuKriyaaH adaa kartaa huuN.....duaa hai yeh saath yuuNhii banaa raheN aage bhee.....

KhuSh raheN..apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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mere pyarey chottu.....bahut sarra pyar

Pranaam sister..!

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chottu maine tera yeh geet...bahut baar pada...har baar reply karne ka bhi socha...par reply na kar saki...dil bhar aata raha....chottu maine to shayad tujhe pyar ke siba kuch bhi nahi diya...par tumne mujhe bahut kuch de diya hai...shayad etne ki mai.n haqdaar bhi nahi hoon....aaj mai.n tere jazbaato.n mei.n dab gaye chottu....aur rajveer ji ne sach kaha hai...mujhe aapne chottu ke pyar par garv hai....maine kuch to aisa diya hi hai shayad tujhe jo mai.n bhi nahi jaanti ki kaya...jiske badley mei.n mujhe tujse etna sab mil raha hai....chottu dua karti hoon ki hamara yeh rishta yeh pyar yu hi banna rahe..kabhi bhi hum dil se door na ho...be-shak hamarey beech meelo.m ke faasle ho...tu hamesha mere dil mei.n raheyga...mera pyara sa chottu...pyara sa bhai...bahut pyara ahsaas hai yeh chottu....ki mera chottu es kadar mere paas hai...!

aapsey binaa maaNge hi mujHe bahot kuch milaa haii.. maiN ess ke liYe khudaa kaa shuKraGuzaar huuN... aor chaahe bhale hi ham me.N meeloN kaa faaslaa ho aap hameShaa mere saath ho yehii lagtaa haii...

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(Phulo.n ka tarro.n ka sabka kahna hai,
aik hazaro.n mai.n meri bhana hai,
sari umr humey sang rahna hai...")
gaa-kar sunaya to meri aankhe bhar aaye thi..badi mushkil se contrrol kiya tha kuad ko....aur pura din teri woh awaz mere kaan.o mei.n shahad golti rahi...

maine jab aapko wish karne call kiYaa thaa to aapne kahaa toHfe meiN aik gaana hi sunaa do to mere dil sey aapke liYe yehi gaana niklaa... aur mujHe maalUm thaa sister jab maiN ye gaana gaa rahaa thaa to aapkii uss KhaamoShi ko aor aapkii aankhoN kii namii ko meHsoos kiYaa thaa maine...
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teri yeh "karazdaar rahun.ga" wali baat acchi nahi lagi...bhai - bhaen mei.n yeh karaz shabad kaha se aa gaya...sochna aisa hota hai kaya...mai.n nahi maan-ti aise baat ko...! phir kabhi aisa na kahna...hamarey beech mei.n pyar ka rishta hai...esko karaz ka naam mat dena kabhi....!

sorry.. jee fir kabhee aisaa nahiiN kahuNgaa..kyuuNkii aapko baRe achchhe sey maaluum haii mujHe bahot darr lagtaa haii aapkii daaNT sey.. hehe..

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aur tere liye do lines likh rahi hoon...jo baar meri juba par aa rahi hai.n

"Tera mujse hai phele ka naata koi,
yu hi nahi dil lubata koi...jane tu ja jane na...
maaney tu ja maaney na....tera mujse hai....."




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aur chottu...dilip...tabiyat thik na hone ki vajha se hum sab ke beech jaha teri es mahfil mei.n nahi aa saka....uske liye bhi yeh geet hai mere paas...kal us se aur mamata (bhabhi) se baat karke bahut accha laga...mujhe umeed hai shayad woh jaldi hi mujhe mileyga bhi...kyuki biwi ka kahna sab ko maan-na padta hai, aur mamta es zid par hai ki didi se milwa lao mujhe...samjay.

jee sahii kahaa....dilip bhaa'ii kyaa baat haii...!!ye sister kyaa keh rahe haiN?? to fir aapkii ShikaayateN ab mujHe bhaabhi sey hii karni paReNgii... heheh

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chottu tumne mera yeh din hamesha ke liye yaadgar bana diya...shukriya mere pyarey bhai...

bahut sare pyar aur duao.n ke saath

teri sister


mere liye bhii yeh din yaadGaar raheNgaa sister...apnaa Khayaal raKheN... KhuSh raheN....

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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dear dhaval jee, aaj aapko pada bahut acha laga sach mein dil se nikle hue aapke jasbaat bahut ..... i hv no words .
sunita jee ko meri taraf se janamdin kee laakhon badahiyan.
namaskaaR aru jee:

kaisey haiN aap?... baRe dino baad aapko merii teHreer par deKhaa maine... KhuShii hu'ii... ehsaaSoN ko pasaNd karne ke liYe aapka shuKriyaaH... ummid kartaa huuN aap aage bhee mujHe yuuNhii paRhte raheNge...

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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dhaval dost namaskar

yaar kamal kar diya tune bada hi pyaara geet ka tohfa diya hai tune sister ko
or dekh main yahan aa hi nahi paya kya karoon tabiyat kuch nasaz thi. per koi baat nahi ab main sister ko badhaii de deta hoon

" many many happy returns of the day"

or teri is khoobsurat kalam per meri dhero badhaii

khush rahna mere dost

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Dilip bhaa'ii:

huzoor ab kaisii tabiyat haii aapkii??.... haaN maalUm thaa kii bhaaii saaHeb kii tabiyat kuch Theek nahiiN isiiliYe kuch din sey gaayab hai... par aap fir bhii yahaaN aaYeN aor aapne waQt diYaa baRaa hii achchhaa lagaa... bas aap yuuNhii saath dete rahiYeNgaa...

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat..jsk

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hahahhaha waah didi ise main kya manu...... meri khilli to nahi uda rahi ho aa.n
ab mazboorii to aap samajh hi sakti ho na..................
accha laga didi aapne mujhe yaad kiya...........
apna khyal rakhna.........
bye
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haaN bhaa'ii mazboorii.... zaraa mujHe bhii samjHaa dijiYe ..kyaa haii yeH...hehehe


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namaskar dhaval bhai,

app kaise hain, maaf kijiye bahut dher baad aaya hun. humein to malum b nahi tha k didi ka janam din tha. aapne jo likha, aishe ehsaas sirf sache dil se hi nikal sakte hain. aapki yhe nazm humein to bahut achi lagi, itne gehre ehsaas likhe wo b itni masuumiyat se, wah kya baat hai.

aapne jo likha hai wo vakai tareef-e-kabil hai. daad hajir hai janab kabul kijiye.

aapka bhai

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manish bhaa'ii namaskaaR:

dost maalUm haii kii aap exams kii wajah sey nahiiN aa paate the bazm meiN.... to mwaafii kii ko'ii zaroorat hii nahiiN dost... par aapne aate hi ess teHreer ko paRhaa Khushii hu'ii... aapkii daad sar'aankhoN par.. Khush raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN...

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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