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" YE " dhaval" KAHI TOOT NA JAYE....." a shayri for her... ek dard bhari dastaa |
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" YE " dhaval" KAHI TOOT NA JAYE....." a shayri for her... ek dard bhari dastaa -
12th September 2006, 11:01 AM
izhar kiya tha kal jisne mujhse
uska jawab kahi inkaar me na badal jaye........... jindagi kal khusi k sang ji rahi thi wo aaj dard bhari dastaan na ban jaye............... deti thi kal jo sath mera har pal wo kahi sath chhodne ki duhai na de jaye.......... sawari thi isne kal meri jindagi kahi aaj uski waje se zindagi bikhar na jaye........... likha karta tha aj tak shayri-e-ishq me, kal se har peshkas shayri-e-dard me na aa jaye.......... kisi k aane se muskura raha tha ye "dhaval" ab uske jane se kahi "dhaval" toot na jaye............... ye "dhaval" kahi toot na jaye.................. A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ........ |
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Re: " YE " dhaval" KAHI TOOT NA JAYE....." a shayri for her... ek dard bhari da -
12th September 2006, 11:14 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by dhavalrami4you
[B]izhar kiya tha kal jisne mujhse uska jawab kahi inkaar me na badal jaye........... jindagi kal khusi k sang ji rahi thi wo aaj dard bhari dastaan na ban jaye............... deti thi kal jo sath mera har pal wo kahi sath chhodne ki duhai na de jaye.......... sawari thi isne kal meri jindagi kahi aaj uski waje se zindagi bikhar na jaye........... likha karta tha aj tak shayri-e-ishq me, kal se har peshkas shayri-e-dard me na aa jaye.......... kisi k aane se muskura raha tha ye "dhaval" ab uske jane se kahi "dhaval" toot na jaye............... hi dear are yaar mujhe aaj batao ye ho kya raha hai is shayri e ishq main ye dard bhari dastane kahan se aa gayi...... udhar pooja dard bhari dastan kah rahi hai..... or uske kalam ke baad tumne bhi dard bhara kalam likh dala..... kya hai ye esi kya baat ho gayi ki tum dono dard main doob rahe hooo... yaar tum basinde ho mohhabd ki duniya ke...... jinke ghar hamesha pyar ki khuboo se mahkate hai.n ye dard bagerah tum hamare jaise be murad logo le liye rahne do yaar....................... khuda kare tumhari jindgi main kabhi koi dard na aaye or hamesha payr bahre kalam likhte raho........... samjhe chalo ab muskurao tumhara ek begana sa dost dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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12th September 2006, 12:49 PM
DILIP
kisine kaha hai k kaanto k sath gul bekhumar khilenge ishq hota hai jahan waha gum jarur milenge i think aisa hi likha hai KISI KO KISI KA JAWAB HAI YE PESHKAS KHUSI ME BHI DARD KA EHSAS HAI YE PESHKAS AGAR WO NAHI TO TO KUCH BHI NAHI.......... BAS DIL NE SOCHA AUR LIKH DIYA MAIN AISA HI KARTA HU JO DIL SOCHTA HAI BAS USE HI LIKHTA HU AAPKA DOST DHAVAL |
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Re: " YE " dhaval" KAHI TOOT NA JAYE....." a shayri for her... ek dard bhari da -
12th September 2006, 01:13 PM
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apke bahot hi achha likha hai sirf read karne ki baat kaha rahi hu. lekin aapko apni mahobbat par ikhtiyar hona chaahiye. mahobbat to ret ka bana ghar hota hai jiski deevare yakeen pe teeki hoti hai gar yakeen hi na hoto ghar to gir hi jayega na. bass teri hi kami thi tohammat lagane me meri chaahat par, varna teri yaadon ke aanso to hume rusva kar hi denge... aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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12th September 2006, 01:18 PM
shukriya pooja ji
aapnebhi meri tarha ,meri post pe aane ka kimti waqt mese waqtnikala bahot bahot shukriya ada karna chahta hu pehle to aapka aur aap ne sach hi kaha hai yakeen hi hai jisse pyaar tikta hai bahot achha kaha aapne pasand aaya hame aapka dost dhaval |
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Re: " YE " dhaval" KAHI TOOT NA JAYE....." a shayri for her... ek dard bhari da |
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Re: " YE " dhaval" KAHI TOOT NA JAYE....." a shayri for her... ek dard bhari da -
12th September 2006, 01:53 PM
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shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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12th September 2006, 04:20 PM
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-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Originally posted by dhavalrami4you izhar kiya tha kal jisne mujhse uska jawab kahi inkaar me na badal jaye........... jindagi kal khusi k sang ji rahi thi wo aaj dard bhari dastaan na ban jaye............... deti thi kal jo sath mera har pal wo kahi sath chhodne ki duhai na de jaye.......... sawari thi isne kal meri jindagi kahi aaj uski waje se zindagi bikhar na jaye........... likha karta tha aj tak shayri-e-ishq me, kal se har peshkas shayri-e-dard me na aa jaye.......... kisi k aane se muskura raha tha ye "dhaval" ab uske jane se kahi "dhaval" toot na jaye............... ye "dhaval" kahi toot na jaye.................. A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ........ -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- great feeling dhaval ji... aapki soch bahut pyari lagi.. aur ek mahboob ke der sajeev chitran prastut kerne ke liye aapko badhayi..you hi aqpane jajbaato ko shabdo ki bhasha dete rahiye...( technical slight variation hai).. shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... ------------ ********* AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... KAISE HO AKANT JI aap meri is post pe aaye aapka bhot bhot shukriya jannab aapne meri is peshkas ko dil se padha aur pasand bhi kiya bahot hi achha laga mujhe main age aur bhi achha likhne ki koshis karunga bas aap jaise dosto ka sath chahiye uhi aate rahiyega aapka dost dhaval |
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13th September 2006, 08:28 AM
Dhaval ji apki dhayri bahut achi hain. Its rockin
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13th September 2006, 12:11 PM
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kon ho ji aap?????? pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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13th September 2006, 12:15 PM
izhar kiya tha kal jisne mujhse
uska jawab kahi inkaar me na badal jaye........... jindagi kal khusi k sang ji rahi thi wo aaj dard bhari dastaan na ban jaye............... deti thi kal jo sath mera har pal wo kahi sath chhodne ki duhai na de jaye.......... sawari thi isne kal meri jindagi kahi aaj uski waje se zindagi bikhar na jaye........... likha karta tha aj tak shayri-e-ishq me, kal se har peshkas shayri-e-dard me na aa jaye.......... kisi k aane se muskura raha tha ye "dhaval" ab uske jane se kahi "dhaval" toot na jaye............... dhaval bhut acha likgha hai ab lafzon par teri pakar or mazboot ho chali hai.....ab zara tum kafuye ka dhiyaan rakha karo......nice try.....keep writing kabhi likhna mat chhorna......hum appke saath hai.......take care.......raj...... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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13th September 2006, 12:32 PM
Dhaval ji apki dhayri bahut achi hain. Its rockin
hi karina kaisi ho aap? aapko meri har peshkas achhi lagti hai mere liye bahot khusui ki baat hai ummid karta hu k aap ko meri har peshkas yuhi pasand aaye aapka dost dhaval |
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13th September 2006, 12:35 PM
dhaval bhut acha likgha hai ab lafzon par teri pakar or mazboot ho chali hai.....ab zara tum kafuye ka dhiyaan rakha karo......nice try.....keep writing kabhi likhna mat chhorna......hum appke saath hai.......take care.......raj......
BIG B aaap aaye to likha hua bhi safal ho gaya main aapse chhota hu aur big B ka hamesha sath milta hai mujhe achha lagta hai aap yuhi sath nibhate rahiyega aaur main kosish karunga k meri age ki peshkas aur behtrin bane aapka dost dhaval |
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4th September 2009, 05:11 PM
chottu teri es poetry aaj hi nazar gaye..............arsa phele likha hai tumne yeh, ab en ahsaaso.n par kya comment doon ya kya compliment doon....samaj nahi aa raha, par ahsaas hai bahut acche.......!
pyar ke saath sister  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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4th September 2009, 10:46 PM
dhawal bhai
ek baat kahunga apne lka bhot acha hai per apne jo lika hai usse yeh samjh aya hai ke apko apni muhobat pe bharosa nai. dost mhobbat hi aisi chiz hai jiska dhaga vishwas ka hota hai au yeh dhage ki mazbuti ghatti aur badti hai ita vishwas karoge uta dhaga mazbut aur jita vishwas kam uta dhaga kamzor. Abed Farooqui Jalegi shammaye tere naam se qamar Parwaana hun tera naam jo liya karun |
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Pranaam! merii yeh Pooraanii koShiShoN ko maiN haMeShaa paRhtaa huuN.. aaj deKhaa tou ees pe aapka jawaab deKhaa.. aapne merii Shuruaat se hi hausilaah afzA'ii kii haii! bas yeh saath kabhee bhee ChhoRiyeNgaa nahiiN! apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ChhoTu ~ Dhaval |
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Aadaab! sab se pehle tou aapne mere ehsaasoN ko pasaNd kiyaa usske liye maiN aapka be-Had ShuKraGuzaar huuN... beeteN kal meiN maiN ab jaanaa nahiiN chaahtaa bhaa'ii.. Khair aapne baat poochh hi liN hai to jahaaN tak baat ki aapne muHabbat pe mere yakiiN kii uske baare meiN maiN kuch kahuuNgaa nahiiN .. par haaN itnaa zaruur kahuuNgaa ki apni kismat pe ab bharosaa nahiiN rahaa mujhe.. aur aapne jahaaN tak baat ki hai viShwaas kii ,, viShwaas se muHabbat mazbut bantii hai bilkul saHeeH haii.. maiN bhee maantaa huuN viShwaas bahot zaruuree hai muHabbat meiN .. aap yahaaN aayeN mujhe bahot hi KhuShii hu'ii! yuuNhi paRhte rahiyeNgaa aage bhee! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat W'salaam aapka ~ Dhaval |
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6th September 2009, 04:46 AM
Dard se bhari tumhari ye rachna dil ko choo gayi,..
Nahi jaanti kyun dard hai, aur kis baat ka darr mere pyare bhai ko, phir bhi dua karungi, jo bhi dard hai woh jald hi khushi me badal jaaye... Apna khayal rakho! Aur sada muskuraate raho... aansoo ache nahi lagte tumhare paas! Chalo jaldi se apne yellow teeth waali.. colgate smile de do mujhe  Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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namaste! kaise hai.n aap? arre didi ziNdagee meN filhaal to ko'ii Ghum nahiiN ! sab Happy Happy haii.. aapne merii koShiSh ko pasaNd kiiyaa bahot KhuShi huii!arre arre yellow teeth waali smile to aapki hai didi.. bhool gayeN fir se aap koii baat nahiiN hotaa he .. maiN apni safed daaNtoN waali Smile diKhaata huuN yeh rahii. ---->> Hmm.. aap bhee KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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Danny bhaiya:
pranaam! aapko merii kavviSh par deKh kar haMeShaa mujhe KhuShi hotee haii.! yuuNhi aath dete raheN aage bhee! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat jai shree kriShnaa..! aapka ~ Dhaval |
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Kaise haiN aap? Bahut khoob ehsaas haiN aapke.... Neeche wala sheyr dilke kuch zyada kareeb laga... likha karta tha aj tak shayri-e-ishq me, kal se har peshkas shayri-e-dard me na aa jaye.......... Likhte rahiye..... Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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27th November 2009, 10:43 PM
Dhaval jii,
Kaise hain aap? aacha hua meine date dekh li jab aapne ghazal post ki ..kya likhtii pata nahii.. ghazal behaat pasand aayii... jab koi pyaar mein hota hai ..kabhie na kabhie yeh darr zarror aata hai ... LikHTEY rahye .. hamesha khush rahye ... bhagwaan aapko dheer saari khushiyaan dean ... aapna khayal rakhiye ,,,, aapki dost mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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ishq ishq na karnni ki adiye. ishq di manzil door had ishq di enni ki adiye .. jinni ki lammi khazoor chad jaave choobe prem rass... digg pave chakna choor (NM) ab bhayee ... okhli mai sar diya to moosal se ghabrana kya ishq fana ka naam hai .. ishq mai zindgi na dekh so dont worry ... jo hota hai achy ke liye hota hai take care |
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